When love knocks your soul
When jealousy puts its foot on your throat
When passion makes you breathless
When everything else seems senseless
When music plays on your soul’s strings
When creativity makes strong kicks
When words are born in your mind
When feelings are storming inside
When curiosity hugs you
When excitement wraps you
When you find new insight
When your dreams become bright
When there are hopes, plans and fears
When there are joy, love and tears
… Then you are alive!…
16 replies to "You’re alive!"
I meet most of the criteria here so I’m alive! Very cool poem Ani. I have some unpublished poetry that I’m planning to post to my blog in the next month or so but I doubt it will resonate with people like yours will.
Thanx Joel!
BTW you can not know how your poems will resonate before they are published, so go for it.
“When passion makes you breathless”
Very Nice indeed !
Cool poem, Ani!
Thanx Bobbi and Lori. AList really makes people connect 🙂
Brought some things “alive” in my head with the quick read.
Mahalo!
Jt – welcome 🙂
Love this Ani! It’s fun to mix up our blogs with some poetry or creative writing. I Tweeted to share with the world.
Thanx Sarah!
Actually that’s what I was worried about – whether the creative writing part does not damage the focus of the blog. I’m glad you feel that it’s even benefitting 🙂
LOVE IT!!!!!!
enough said 🙂
Noch Noch
thank you Noch Noch!
Love it! Experiencing everything, even the not so great, is living. Thanks for sharing your poetic side with us. 🙂
Thank you Kaylee.
Poetry neer had so many comments before 🙂
Wow beautiful words, very touching. Keep them coming
Thanx Ciara… unfortunately words come whenever they want and don’t come if they don’t want 🙂
Living the TIME OF MY LIFE!
xxx 🙂